Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 26, 2020
Alpaca
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi there Ben, My name is Peitynn from Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you did facts about Aplaca the animal and I love that animal. This reminds me of when we did facts about other animals like a book of possums. Maybe next time you could check your spelling errors. Anyway thank you for sharing your work and I want you to see my blog at http://wpspeitynnf.blogspot.com/ and can you plz comment on my blog!!!
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I am happy that you like my slide. And also thanks for the advice bye!!!!
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